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Character Profile: Amethyst Whitlocke

17 July 2019 No Comments

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FULL NAME: Amethyst Judith Hazel Whitlocke (née Cheshill)

BORN: 20 August 1763, Maidstone, Kent (aged 30-31 in Lust & Liberty; 51-52 in Sin & Secrecy)

EYE COLOUR: Brown

HAIR COLOUR: Brown

FAMILY: Judith Cheshill (mother, deceased); George Whitlocke (husband)

ALLIES: Lady Oliviera Vyrrington, George Whitlocke, Judith-Ann Haffisidge

ENEMIES: Luke Warwick

OCCUPATION: Lady’s maid, housekeeper and cook

PERSONALITY: Timid, subservient, kind, unconfident; inferiority complex sufferer

POLITICS: Unknown

FAITH: Catholic

Who is Amethyst Whitlocke?

Amethyst is probably the purest member of the Vyrrington household. But that’s only because she would be too frightened to be anything more or less. As a character, I set her up to show redeeming qualities of both her mistress Lady Vyrrington and her husband George Whitlocke. Both have an affection for her that they do not display to any other characters.

But by characterising Amethyst like this, I have allowed her to be an unlikely suspect in a few of the mysteries involved in the Berylford Scandals. Pushing Lady Vyrrington down the stairs was one. It showed a depth to Amethyst’s personality – while she fears almost everyone, she is still also capable of anger, even towards someone like the Countess. And when Lady Vyrrington threatens to kill any hope of her marrying Whitlocke in Lust & Liberty, that’s a step too far. In Sin & Secrecy, I have had a chance to show a newfound confidence and calm in Amethyst, in a conversation between her and her husband after Abel Stirkwhistle gives him an awkward task…

from Chapter XVI of The Berylford Scandals: Sin & Secrecy

“What did Mr Stirkwhistle want?” she changed the subject as the butler finally seated himself on the edge of their bed and began to remove his livery. He did not respond immediately. If there was one person Whitlocke felt he could confide in, it was his wife, but his protectiveness over her was fierce. And from the conversation he had just had with Abel – a scenario drowning in secrets and, for all Whitlocke knew, far worse – it was imperative that Amethyst be spared any association. Not just for her own sake, but for that of Lady Vyrrington. Her lady’s maid was as good as a little sister to the Countess, having been in her service since she was an emaciated, frightened ward of the workhouse. Under the tutelage and hitherto unfamiliar kindness of Lady Oliviera, Amethyst’s sense of total inferiority was gradually eroded and, now in her mid-forties, she was confidently in charge of the upkeep of Beryl Court alongside her husband. While the numerous losses she had suffered had rendered the Countess a frigid and loveless shell, that sororal affection had lasted. In that familial vein, any scandal associated with the Whitlockes extended to Her Ladyship. And that would never be acceptable.

“Nothing of consequence,” at length the butler to his wife replied, cursing himself mentally for deceiving her.

“Thought it might have had to do with that boy brought to the house,” returned Amethyst, resuming her book. Whitlocke at once wheeled around.

“The boy?”

“Yes; as a matter of fact, Lady Vyrrington’s appetite only seemed to change after that little episode. It might be bothering her.”

“I doubt that.”

“You never know, George – there may yet be the slightest maternal feeling left in her.”

“Hardly the sort of child to rekindle that, though!”

“No, I suppose not.”

As he loosened his cravat, a synapse fired in Whitlocke’s shrewd mind that gave him an idea. An idea to fulfil the task Abel had put upon him, while not lying to his wife any further.

            “She was interested in the boy, come to think of it,” he observed. To himself, Amethyst thought.

            “Yes, she mentioned him to me as well while I was helping her retire,” she replied, not looking up from her book.

            “Perhaps it does do her good. To have young people in the house again. Now it’s only us two, Mr Stirkwhistle, Mrs Urmstone and Mrs Haffisidge who are ever here with her.”

“Lamplighter boys don’t make good companions to ladies of rank, George.”

“I’m not saying he’d be her companion. A junior servant, nothing more. But a young face she’d see in a daily capacity.”

Amethyst chuckled.

“You actually sound serious,” she said.

“I am serious.”

Her mouth hung open.

“And just how, pray, are you planning to persuade Lady Vyrrington to approve this? More to it – since when did you care so much how she feels?”

Whitlocke had not thought that far. Fortunately for him, he was a skilled improviser – a trait that made him all the more efficient as a butler – the ability to expect the unexpected – and so his answer came swiftly. He disguised the moments it took to think about it with more grumbling of begrudging concern for his mistress’ welfare.

            “Well, we’re neither of us getting any younger, my love. And, if Lady Vyrrington dies, and Master Spencer or Master Edward don’t come back from the wars-”

            “Oh George, don’t say things like that!” Amethyst interrupted in a moment of uncharacteristic exasperation, “Those dear boys – of course they will come back!”

            “But suppose they don’t, dear. Lady Amelia cannot inherit until she comes of age or until she marries. And if she does marry, control of the estate passes to her husband. He’ll probably have his own staff.”

            “So… what? You want to stay in Her Ladyship’s favour? And pray that she leaves us a stipend in her will? I think you know the money for that kind of thing has long been spent.”

Whitlocke, at last undressed for bed, laid back next to his wife. He had no further words – she had thwarted him in a rare instance of confidence on her part. But in the moments of silence that followed as she continued on with her book, the butler remembered that there had been two questions she had put to him, and he had only answered the second.

            “I was thinking you might put the suggestion to her, Amethyst,” he broke the silence.

            “What suggestion?”

            “That we hire that boy as a servant. It may do Lady Vyrrington good, as I say. Will you do it as a favour to me?”

Closing her book, for she knew she would be in receipt of no peace now, Amethyst sighed a heavy sigh.

            “Of course I can’t deny you, George,” she murmured, taking his hand in hers, “Though you must know the outcome you want is far from likely.”

            “I know that. Just want you to ask her. Mind you – if she were to say ‘yes’ to anyone, it’s you!”

            “She has said ‘no’ plenty of times as well! But very well – I’ll mention it to her when I’m delivering her breakfast tomorrow.”

Origins & Basis

Amethyst went through a lot of changes from her inception back in 2008. She was one of the original 40 characters that went into the first Berylford story, but her name was actually Imelda Burgess (her husband also had this surname). Imelda was deliberately after Imelda Staunton, one of my favourite actresses. I can’t actually remember why I changed her forename at all. Amethyst is my sister’s birthstone, so it’s something of a homage to her, while Whitlocke is a manipulation of one of my great-grandparents’ surnames.

Over the course of writing, the only thing to change about Amethyst’s character is the nature of her relationships with her husband and her mistress. Whitlocke was originally quite abusive (albeit not physically so, just verbally threatening), while Lady Vyrrington was as cold with her as with everyone else. I refer back to what I said earlier in the article – I ultimately decided Amethyst was to show off these two characters’ redeeming qualities. Her backstory, involving near-starvation in a workhouse and being rescued by Lady Vyrrington’s father, came in the early drafts of Lust & Liberty, when trying to justify why Amethyst was so timid and easily frightened

Literary Inspiration

Whitlocke is something of a sympathetic version of Jeremiah Flintwinch from Dickens’ Little Dorrit. With this in mind, Amethyst is loosely based on Affery, Flintwinch’s wife. The meek little maidservant who lives in mortal fear of everyone and everything. But with the changes I put into Amethyst over the years, she became less and less like that original model.

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Character Profile: George Whitlocke

26 May 2019 No Comments

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FULL NAME: George Edward Whitlocke

BORN: 16 October 1760, London (aged 33-34 in Lust & Liberty; 54-55 in Sin & Secrecy)

EYE COLOUR: Blue

HAIR COLOUR: Blonde

FAMILY: Amethyst Whitlocke (née Cheshill) (wife)

ALLIES: Lord Wilson Vyrrington, Amethyst Whitlocke, Abel Stirkwhistle, Lady Oliviera Vyrrington (sometimes), the Vyrrington children

ENEMIES: Lady Oliviera Vyrrington (sometimes), Jesse Blameford, Luke Warwick

OCCUPATION: Butler

PERSONALITY: Loyal, dogged, stern, officious, generous, discrete

POLITICS: Unknown

FAITH: Catholic

Who is George Whitlocke?

Labelling the Vyrrington butler Whitlocke is complicated. In Lust & Liberty, he is not really a protagonist, as he poses a lot of threats and obstacles to Lady Vyrrington, the main anti-heroine. However, he is not a villain either, since his motives are not evil. They stem from his loyalty to his master, Lord Vyrrington. Whitlocke is one of those ambiguous characters.

And this role continues in Sin & Secrecy. He assists both Abel Stirkwhistle and Lady Vyrrington as a sort of scout for information, but also as a messenger. His relationship with his mistress is very much the same; since Abel is the main focus of S&S, I thought it would be fun to explore his friendship with Whitlocke a little further. They have known each other for years and, despite the class difference, they’re of a similar intellectual level. That was why I thought it fitting and believable to make them drinking partners. It gives me an outlet to have Abel talk about things he couldn’t necessarily confide in Lady Vyrrington…

from Chapter XV of The Berylford Scandals: Sin & Secrecy

Whitlocke was stood at the bar when Abel entered the tavern, almost knowing psychically that the arrival of the ageing crustacean of a man was imminent. The butler handed Abel a glass of red wine, which he took with the keenness of a child at the sight of sweets.

            “What’s wrong?” Whitlocke asked Abel, leading him through a glass-paned door into the snug of the tavern. It was more of a private lounge for the two men; they were the only ones who ever went in there. It had been installed for the benefit of the Berylford ladies, but none would dare even enter The St. Barbara’s Arms, much less drink in there, however privately.

Abel’s response to Whitlocke’s question was prefixed by a heavy sigh and he wearily took his seat.

            “This schoolteacher thing will be the death of me,” he groaned, gulping his wine.

            “It’s only been a few days!”

            “And a few days too long. Last time we advertised a job at the schoolhouse we had responses left, right and centre in no time at all!”

            “Yes, but if I remember rightly, the woman your sister hired was on the run, was she not?” returned Whitlocke snidely.

Abel huffed.

            “One schoolmistress dies in mysterious circumstances, that’s not enough to put off the criminals,” he observed, “But two die in such circumstances, even the amoral among us won’t answer the advertisement. The only ones we can’t put off are those who aren’t remotely qualified.”

Whitlocke laughed.

            “For someone who hates the job so much, you don’t seem to be in too much of a hurry to pass it along to someone else!” he said.

            “I don’t know what you mean.”

            “Berylford isn’t Kensington, Abel. The children here aren’t going to be great statesmen or thinkers or writers. Those that live to see fourteen will either end up in the army or on the farms. Or in service.”

            “You could have been a statesman if I recall correctly. You chose service.”

            “I chose Lord Wilson Vyrrington. It was you and your family that made me believe service wasn’t something to be ashamed of.”

            “Perhaps. But I fail to see the point you’re trying to make here, Whitlocke.”

            “It doesn’t matter how qualified they are,” the butler replied, “As long as they can read, write and manage arithmetic, and can teach the children to do the same, that’s all they need to fit them for the world. What’s more important for you is to get out of that place. Before you add yourself to its increasing body count!”

Abel finished his glass of wine. His mouth formed a stilted smile.

            “See?” he said, “Such wisdom and common sense are wasted in service! Even to one such as Lady Vyrrington! I’m going to buy you another drink.”

Origins and Basis

George Whitlocke’s surname was originally Burgess, which I changed to name him after one of my great-grandparents. He was of the original 40 characters created back in 2008 for the first definitive Berylford story. His relationship with Lady Vyrrington was always acrimonious, even in those early drafts. I had not decided why at the time, however, since the story involving the affair with Jesse Blameford had not been written or even thought about.

When we think of butlers and other servants, we generally see them as loyal people who are devoted to their employers’ every need. I wanted to challenge that. And the simple way to do that was to have Whitlocke and Lady Vyrrington mutually hate one another. But they tolerate each other for the sake of their other loved ones: Lord Wilson and Amethyst. However, it made sense for them to put aside their differences in times of grief, such as the death of Lord Wilson and those of the Vyrrington children.

Literary Inspiration

Like Abel, Whitlocke is somewhat based on Dickens’ Jeremiah Flintwinch from Little Dorrit. Not physically, of course – primarily in his relationship with his employer. Flintwinch is both an ally and an obstacle to Mrs Clennam in the same way that Whitlocke is to Lady Vyrrington. Otherwise, the character is quite original. However, I have heard a reader of Lust & Liberty compare him to Tommy Lascelles, as portrayed by Pip Torrens in The Crown on Netflix. That rigid and unwavering devotion to the proper order of things. This was quite accidental, but something I’m bearing in mind as I revise Sin & Secrecy.

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